Sunday, 19 July 2015

My holiday writing

My birthday party writing


 20/7 

In my holiday I had my birthday party at Kids Republic. When I was going, my next door neighbours came because he was invited to my birthday party. Then I zoomed to Kids Republic and fast walked inside. The first one to get there was Ollie and Cole. And loads other people you know what that means loads of presents. Then the gates opened while we bursted with excitement. We had to place our shoes in party room two. Then everyone was asking me who's in who's in? I said Ollie "run" I shouted with excitement. 

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